Damage Control

Damage Control - Timothy Gilbert The actual plot line could have made Damage Control a best seller if it didn't lack organization of the plot and subplots, as well as better characterization of the players in the book. I found it hard to follow and hard to know when one plot ended, when another subplot began, and when it returned to the main plot. The author has a sequel to Damage Control called "Overload" that I have not had the opportunity to read, but was wondering if the author were to combine the two, would it make more sense? Maybe I'll have to get it to see.